This week I focused on working on the feedback I received from my professor and my fellow classmates. Pretty much everything was related to design elements. A lot of the issues were with tying things together to create unity. I had changes my feature area background to a gray binary pattern that faded in and out. However, I was told it was still a little too present. I decided to tone that down a bit more. My biggest issue was figuring out how to display the character's descriptions. My first take on it seemed too empty and blocky. I asked some other people in my class and one of my fellow classmates suggested adding color since my my design so far had only 2 colors and was very clean in that way. This is what I came up with:
I decided to soften the edges and add a gradient. Each character has a different color which matches something in their design. I think this is a better way of displaying the information in a way which owns the space without cluttering it. There is still quite a bit to touch up, but I feel more confident in my design as a whole.
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